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Under a bruised purple hurricane sky on Calle Sánchez, Max secures plastic over the print-shop windows from a crate while Sofía reaches up with duct tape as the first hard rain arrives.
Chapter 12
The Hurricane (Part 1)
Max · 6 min
Thursday Evening
Calle Sanchez
The sky turned a color I had never seen before. It wasn't gray; it was a bruised, sickly purple. The air was heavy, hot, and completely still. The calm before the hammer dropped.
"Pass me the tape!" I shouted.
I wasn't Max the Architect anymore. I was Max the laborer.
I was standing on a plastic crate outside Imprenta Mercedes, taping thick plastic sheeting over the top of the glass windows. My linen shirt was soaked through with sweat.
"Here!" Sofía threw up a roll of duct tape.
We had spent the last three hours in a frenzy. We raided the ferretería (hardware store) down the block, buying plywood, plastic, and batteries.
My phone had been buzzing incessantly in my pocket.
15 Missed Calls: Catalina.
10 Texts: "Where are you?" "El Alcalde is sending a car." "Max, answer me."
I ignored them all.
"The wind is starting," Sofía said, her voice trembling.
A gust whipped down the street, sending a plastic chair skittering across the cobblestones. The palm trees overhead began to thrash.
"Help me with the shutter!" I yelled.
We grabbed the chain of the heavy metal security door. It was rusted and stubborn.
"On three!" I counted. "One, two, pull!"
We hauled on the chain. The metal shrieked, inching down.
CRACK.
Thunder exploded overhead, shaking the ground. The rain started—not a drizzle, but a deluge, instantly soaking us.
"It's stuck!" Sofía cried, pulling frantically. The shutter was jammed two feet from the ground. "Water is going to get in!"
I looked at the gap. The street was already turning into a river. The gutters were overflowing with brown, churning water.
"We can't fix it from here!" I shouted over the wind. "We have to sandbag it from the inside and get out!"
"I'm not leaving the machines!"
"Sofía!" I grabbed her shoulders. She was shivering, her hair plastered to her face. "The shop is ground level. It’s going to flood. We need to get higher."
"Where?" she sobbed, looking at the rising water. "We can't stay here!"
"Your apartment!" I said. "Is it upstairs?"
"Yes!" she nodded. "It's 1B. It's on the second floor!"
"Go!" I pushed her toward the side door of the building. "Open the door! I'll finish the barricade!"
She hesitated, looking at her shop one last time, then ran toward the residential entrance.
I grabbed the heavy bags of potting soil we had bought (they were out of sand) and slammed them against the gap in the shutter. It wasn't perfect, but it would hold back the debris.
My phone rang again. Catalina.
I looked at it. The rain blurred the screen.
I pictured her in the Casas del XVI. She had a generator. She had wine. She was safe.
I turned the phone off.
I grabbed the bag of supplies—candles, rum, crackers—and ran for the stairwell where Sofía was waiting.
Apartment 1B
We burst into the apartment and slammed the door, locking out the wind. Sofía slid the deadbolt home with shaking hands.
The silence was sudden and jarring.
The apartment smelled of lavender, vanilla, and old books. It was small, tidy, and most importantly, it was dry.
Sofía collapsed against the door, sliding down to the floor. She was shaking violently.
"Hey," I said gently. "Hey. We made it."
I dropped the bag and knelt beside her.
"My printers," she whispered, hiding her face in her hands. "If they get wet... I can't replace them, Max. The insurance... I let it lapse last month to pay the rent."
My heart broke. This was the razor's edge she lived on.
"We set the barricade," I reminded her. "And the machines are raised on tables. They'll be okay."
I realized she was freezing. The adrenaline crash was setting in. Her lips were turning blue.
"We need to get dry," I said.
Sofía nodded. She stood up shakily.
"There are towels in the bathroom," she said. "I'll... I'll grab dry clothes from my room."
I went to the small bathroom. I grabbed two thick towels. When I came out, she was standing in the living room, hugging herself.
"I'll turn around," I said, turning my back to give her privacy.
I heard the rustle of wet clothes peeling off skin. My heart hammered against my ribs—not from the storm, but from the intimacy of it. We were trapped. Alone. In the dark.
"Okay," she whispered.
I turned back.
She had changed into a large, dry cotton t-shirt, her legs bare. She was towel-drying her hair. In the flashes of lightning through the slats of the window, she looked vulnerable and breathtaking.
I stripped off my soaked shirt, using a towel to dry my chest and arms.
Sofía watched me. She didn't look away. Her eyes traced the line of my shoulder, down to the jagged scar on my ribcage.
"You're hurt," she said, stepping closer.
"Old scar," I said.
She reached out. Her fingers brushed the white line on my skin. Her touch burned colder than the rain.
"From the accident?" she asked softly.
"Yeah. The steering column. Ten years ago."
"You carry a lot of ghosts, Max," she whispered.
"We all do."
She looked up at my face. We were inches apart. The storm howled outside, slamming against the building, but inside, the air was thick with a different kind of pressure.
The smell of rain and her vanilla perfume filled my senses.
I wanted to kiss her. God, I wanted to pull her close and forget about Jersey, forget about the contract, forget about the sterile lie my life had become.
But I remembered the look in her eyes at the club. Glass tower.
If I touched her now, while she was scared and vulnerable, I was taking advantage. I was just another force of nature happening to her, chaotic and temporary.
I stepped back. It took every ounce of willpower I had.
"I found candles in the bag," I said, my voice rough. "And the rum. We should... we should wait out the storm."
Sofía blinked, as if waking from a trance. She pulled her hand back slowly.
"Right," she said, her voice small. "Rum."
We sat on the floor, backs against the sofa, watching the candle flicker. We passed the bottle of Brugal back and forth while the wind tried to tear the world apart outside.
We didn't touch. But the space between us was charged, heavy with the things we weren't saying.
Outside, the world was breaking. Inside, I was finally, terrifyingly, whole.
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