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On the festival stage at Plaza Espana, Max and Sofia hold a grounded full-body bachata frame beneath warm spotlights while the crowd claps and the Alcazar rises behind them.
Chapter 20
The Festival
Sofía · 6 min
Saturday Night
Plaza España
The festival was chaos in the best way.
Plaza España, the massive open square in front of the Alcázar de Colón, was packed with bodies. The stage was lit up with blinding spotlights, and the air smelled of chimichurris, burnt sugar, and expensive cologne.
I was backstage in the holding tent, trying to glue a rhinestone back onto my shoe. I was shaking.
Not about the dancing—I could dance Bachata in my sleep—but about the stakes.
The prize was one hundred thousand pesos. That was the loan payment. That was breathing room from Mr. Vila and his vultures.
"Relax, chula," Mateo said, stretching his hamstrings next to me. He was wearing a shirt that was unbuttoned to his navel, glistening with oil. "We got this. The competition is weak. Just follow my lead."
"Just stick to the routine, Mateo," I warned, my voice tight. "No improvising. No throwing me in the air unless I signal. We need the points for technical accuracy."
"You worry too much. Trust me."
He checked his phone, smiling at a text. He had been distracted all night.
I peeked through the tent flap.
I saw Max.
He was standing near the VIP barrier, right where he said he would be. He looked... devastating. He wasn't wearing a suit. He was wearing a white guayabera—crisp, tailored, looking like a true Dominican gentleman—and dark trousers. He stood with his hands in his pockets, watching the stage with a calm intensity that gave me butterflies.
He caught my eye. He didn't wave. He just tapped his chest, right over his heart. I’m here.
"Next up!" the announcer boomed. "Representing La Zona Colonial... Sofía Mercedes and Mateo Cruz!"
Mateo grabbed my hand. "Showtime, baby."
We walked onto the stage. The lights blinded me. The crowd roared—thousands of people.
The music started—a fast, modern remix of a Romeo Santos track. Mateo launched into it instantly. He was fast. Too fast.
He spun me hard. I stumbled but caught myself.
Stick to the routine, I mentally screamed at him.
But Mateo was showboating. He was playing to the crowd, winking at girls in the front row, throwing in extra footwork that threw off our timing. He was dancing for himself, not for us.
Then, the bridge of the song hit. The big dip.
Mateo grabbed my waist. He dipped me low—too low. His hand slipped on the oil he had slathered on his chest.
My head snapped back. I scrambled for purchase, grabbing his slippery shoulder to stop from hitting the floor. We didn't fall, but it was ugly. Clumsy. The crowd murmured.
Mateo yanked me up, his face red.
"You’re heavy," he hissed in my ear.
SCREEEEECH.
The music cut out abruptly. A high-pitched feedback whine tore through the speakers, followed by silence. The DJ system had crashed.
Silence fell over the plaza. It was agonizing.
"This equipment is trash!" Mateo shouted, throwing his hands up. He looked at me, then at the judges, his ego bruising instantly. "I can't work like this. She’s off the beat, and the sound is garbage."
My jaw dropped. He was blaming me?
"Mateo," I warned, my voice trembling with rage. "Don't you dare."
"I'm out," Mateo said, waving a hand dismissively. "I have a gig at Euphoria in an hour anyway. I'm not risking an injury on this amateur hour. Good luck, Sofía."
He turned and walked off the stage.
He left me there. Under the spotlight. Alone. With three thousand people watching.
The humiliation washed over me like acid. I felt tears pricking my eyes. The crowd started to boo—not at me, but at the situation. It didn't matter. I was the one standing there looking like a fool.
I turned to walk off, to disappear, to forfeit the money and the shop.
Then, a shadow moved in my peripheral vision.
A man vaulted over the VIP barrier. He didn't take the stairs. He hopped onto the stage with a heavy, solid thud.
It was Max.
I didn't think. I just moved.
I saw the look on Sofía’s face—the devastation, the shame—and the red haze I had felt in the morning returned. I wanted to punch Mateo, but violence wouldn't save Sofía’s dignity. Only presence would.
I walked to the center of the stage. The crowd went quiet, confused. Who was the tall gringo in the guayabera?
I stopped in front of Sofía. She looked at me, eyes wide, shimmering with unshed tears.
"Max, what are you doing?" she whispered. "Go away. It's over."
"It's not over," I said calmly.
I turned to the DJ booth. The tech was frantically hitting buttons.
"Maestro!" I shouted, my voice carrying over the silence. "Forget the remix! Give me Volvió el Dolor! Luis Vargas!"
The crowd gasped. Then, a few whistles. Luis Vargas was old school. Bachata de amargue. The bitterness. The real stuff.
The DJ paused, looked at me, then shrugged. He hit play.
The slow, weeping guitar intro filled the plaza. Tang... tang-tang... tang.
I turned back to Sofía. I held out my hand.
"Doña Carmen taught me," I whispered. "Trust me."
Sofía stared at my hand. Then at my face. She saw the fear in my eyes—I was terrified—but she also saw the resolve.
She took my hand.
I didn't spin her. I didn't dip her.
I pulled her in close. Chest to chest. No daylight.
I locked my frame. Shoulders back. Release the engine.
We started to move.
One, two, three, tap.
It was slow. It was grounded. We walked the box step, our hips moving in sync. I wasn't looking at the crowd. I wasn't looking at the judges. I was looking at her.
"You're doing it," she breathed, her eyes searching mine.
"I'm listening to the bongos," I murmured. "Be the earth."
I led her into a turn—simple, elegant, hand over head—and brought her right back into the closed hold. It wasn't about flash. It was about intimacy. It was about telling the crowd, and Mateo, and the whole damn city that I wasn't letting her go.
The crowd, which had been expecting acrobatics, settled down. They stopped filming with their phones and started watching.
Then, they started to clap. Not a polite clap, but a rhythmic clap, on the beat. Clap-clap-clap.
They recognized it. This wasn't a performance. This was a courtship.
"Look at them," I whispered to Sofía. "They love you."
"They love us," she corrected, a smile finally breaking through her pain.
I spun her one last time, wrapping her into my arms so her back was to my chest, and we swayed until the final guitar note faded.
For a second, silence.
Then, the plaza erupted.
"¡ESO EH!" (That's it!) "¡QUE VIVA EL AMOR!"
Sofía turned in my arms, breathless. Her face was glowing.
"Doña Carmen?" she asked, laughing in disbelief.
"She said I move like a sexy refrigerator," I admitted.
Sofía grabbed the lapels of my guayabera and pulled me down. She kissed me—hard—right there on the stage. It wasn't a stage kiss. It was a thank you, a promise, and a claim.
"You are not a refrigerator, Max," she whispered against my lips. "You are a Dominicano."
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