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At a tense Santo Domingo community meeting, Sofía rises to call the room to order while Max stands isolated at the rear wall in his dusty neon construction vest.
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At a tense Santo Domingo community meeting, Sofía rises to call the room to order while Max stands isolated at the rear wall in his dusty neon construction vest.

Chapter 37

The Town Hall

Max · 5 min

Friday Night

Centro Comunal (Community Center)

The room smelled of stale coffee and righteous indignation.

The Community Center was a concrete box with ceiling fans that wobbled dangerously, doing nothing to cool the tempers of the fifty people squeezed inside.

I stood against the back wall, arms crossed, trying to be invisible. It wasn't working. I was the tallest person in the room, and the only one wearing a neon yellow construction vest (I had come straight from the site).

"We cannot trust him!"

A man in the front row—the owner of the souvenir shop next to the hotel—was shouting at Elena Gomez, the Ministry representative.

"He is the one who brought the police!" the man yelled, waving a finger at me. "He ruined the Gala! The street was closed for three days! I lost thousands of pesos in sales because of his show!"

"Mr. Hernandez, please," Elena said, adjusting her glasses nervously. "Mr. DeLuca exposed a safety hazard. He prevented a fire."

"He is the fire!" shouted Doña Clara, the neighborhood gossip. "First he brings the loud machines. Then he brings the police. Now the Ministry says the hotel might stay closed for a year? Who pays for the lost foot traffic? The Gringo?"

All eyes turned to me.

I felt the heat rise in my neck. They weren't wrong. My "heroic" moment had consequences. I had saved lives, but I had killed the local economy.

"I can't pay you," I said, my voice cutting through the murmurs. "I don't have any money."

"Then go home!" someone shouted. "Go back to New York!"

"I am trying to fix it!" I argued, stepping forward. "I have a plan to stabilize the structure without demolition. If we work fast—"

"We don't want your plans!" Mr. Hernandez interrupted. "We want stability! We want the Sterling money, not the DeLuca drama!"

The room erupted. Arguments broke out in Spanish, too fast for me to follow completely, but the tone was clear: Expel the virus.

I looked at the floor. I had fought Catalina. I had fought the lawyers. But I couldn't fight a whole neighborhood that saw me as a curse.

I turned to leave. Maybe they were right. Maybe I was just making it worse.

"Sit down!"

The voice was sharp. Authoritative. Like a whip crack.

Sofía stood up from her metal folding chair in the middle of the room.

The room went quiet. You didn't interrupt La Jefa.

She walked to the front of the room. She stood next to Elena, facing her neighbors. She looked tired—there were dark circles under her eyes from the stress of the eviction notice—but she stood tall.

"You are all idiots," she announced calmly.

"Sofía!" Doña Clara gasped.

"Idiots," Sofía repeated. "You want to chase him away? Fine. Chase him away. And who comes next? Another fancy developer from Miami? Another Sterling with a fake smile and cheap materials?"

She pointed at me.

"Look at him. Look at his boots."

The room looked. My boots were caked in gray concrete dust.

"He isn't wearing a suit," Sofía said. "He is wearing the dust of San Nicolás. He spent the last week carrying buckets for Raúl. He climbed my roof in a storm to save the press. He stood on a stage and humiliated his own wife to save you from burning to death."

She took a step closer to Mr. Hernandez.

"You say he brings drama? I say he brings the truth. And truth is messy. Truth is loud. But it doesn't rot from the inside like that plastic marble."

She looked around the room, meeting every eye.

"He is broke. He is being sued. He has nothing. And yet, he is here, at 8:00 PM on a Friday, trying to save a building that isn't even his."

She walked over to me. She took my hand. Her grip was iron.

"He is not a tourist," she said fiercely. "He is with me. And if you trust me—if you trust the Mercedes name—then you trust him."

Silence stretched out. The ceiling fans clicked rhythmically.

Then, from the back corner, a cane tapped on the floor.

Tap. Tap. Tap.

It was Doña Carmen.

"The Gringo dances like a refrigerator," Doña Carmen announced.

A few people chuckled.

"But," she continued, "he fixes the sink. And he shovels the mud. He is useful."

She looked at me.

"Fix the hotel, Refrigerador. But if you make dust on my laundry again, I will hit you."

The tension broke. Laughter rippled through the room.

Mr. Hernandez sat down, grumbling. "Fine. But fast. We need the tourists back."

Elena Gomez let out a sigh of relief. "Okay. Meeting adjourned."

I looked at Sofía.

"You didn't have to do that," I whispered.

"Yes, I did," she said, letting go of my hand. "I vouched for you, Max. My reputation is now tied to your work. Don't make me look like a fool."

"I won't," I promised.

But as we walked out into the humid night, I saw the worry in her eyes. She had just bet everything on a horse that was currently lame.

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